Tuesday, May 18, 2010

Taka's power

Taka and the two Akatsuki members are exchanging looks. Taka was confident on her win versus them. Will she have any luck to win??

-Let’s go…Quick standing here and get her.

-Don’t be a crybaby Kakuzu…All right I’ll go.

-Don’t get confident on your win you two…Since you’re here to get me you got to know my true self and secrets. I wonder who your boss is. Said Taka

-Hmm, That doesn’t look you anyway. Go Hidan, let finish this fast.

Hidan runs to Taka’s position and is ready to pierce her into her ribs with his scythe. Taka just stayed there with a smile and got the hit with full power. The attack got through her and stayed. Hidan couldn’t move his weapon now. Taka pushes Hidan off and takes his weapon that was stuck inside her. She runs to Hidan desperately grabbing on the weapon that was too heavy for her and got hit back. Hidan runs at high speed and get a scratch on Taka’s leg that was nearly missed. He gets back and began licking the minus blood on his weapon.

-Seem like this is the end. Was saying Kakuzu.

-Hehe when I was having fun…Oh well lets finish this and bring her to the boss.

He plucks his little weapon on his leg where Taka fell and couldn’t use her left leg anymore. Taka was in pain.

-How does that feel?? Was laughing Hidan

Taka smile and get up with one leg.

-Guess I don’t need this leg anymore. Here where things get serious. Said Taka

She gets her scroll from behind and her brush. She draws a knife and uses it to cut her leg off like nothing. Both of Akatsuki were in shock when her leg reformed again like an ink drawing. This time Taka runs to then while drawing a sword. She gets it and clash with Hidan weapon. She does a flip upon Hidan head and delivers a hit to Kakuzu where he shields it with his arms. With a deadly smile on Taka’s face she plucks her sword into Hidan ribs. Guess it was part of her plan all of this attack and those two fell for it. Hidan didn’t feel any pain and punch Taka off where she caught his fist with her hand and caught the other hit coming from Kakuzu with her other hand. With speed she jumps into the air and draws a water whirlpool and delivers that attack to them. They couldn’t move and were trap into the whirlpool. Taka draw some thunder strike and throw them (like Zeus :P) to the enemy where a blow can be seem. When the smoke clears Hidan was still standing while Kakuzu was on the ground but seconds later stand up.

-That not going to be easy. Was thinking Taka

She draws something invisible to the human eyes. She blows on it and wait some time. Hidan and Kakuzu were on their guards not knowing what will happen. Some seconds later little ink bomb explode between the two eyes. They were blind for a second when the attack continues. Taka takes the advantage and draws some stars. She throws them into the sky and draws a fire ball where it collides with the stars and create medium meteorite. It clashes into Hidan and Kakuzu where they flies away into the air and Taka again draw two ink dogs where they head but them both and clashes into a giant rock where it breaks.

-I can continue all day long. It takes minimum chakra each drawing I make hehe. Was saying Taka

Hidan still with no damage was standing and Kakuzu second heart has broke. He got serious where two zombies head got on his shoulder. One of them launch a fire blast where Taka was in shock and evade the attack.

-That was close…Damn he’s a fire type too. That’s my weakness. Was thinking Taka

The zombie head launch a lighting attack and hit Taka where she take no damage and continue running.

-Lighting have no effect…Was thinking Hidan.

-Why did she only miss the fire attack…OFFCOURSE…Ink weakness is fire obviously. I should melt her to death…But boss want her alive so I’ll go easy. Was thinking Kakuzu

He runs to Taka and use his fire blast attack some more. Taka was too fast for him but Hidan get a hold of her. Kakuzu tries once more and Taka melt into an ink clone where Hidan got the hit and was pissed.

-Don’t you know to aim you damn ****. Was swearing Hidan

-Well you’re the one who lost control on her. Was responding Kakuzu

Taka appears behind Kakuzu and a black sting got a hold of her.

-I knew you’ll take advantage of this. You can't use clone now. This in made from pure chakra that holds you tight. Lets ‘’heat’’ this up. Said Kakuzu while using again his attack

This time it gets Taka with full power where she suffers in pain. She was beginning to melt slowly but he stops. He uses his lighting attack now and this time, Taka is hurt from it. She was weaken down from the melting down and was hurt. She fell on the ground and receive a hit from Hidan with his scythe into Taka’s body. She couldn’t remake herself like before because of the fire hit. It needed time.She fell unconscious and was put on Hidan’s back and they headed to Akatsuki hide out. Taka last resort was into letting a little drawing messaging bird to get to the Hokage without any of those two seeing. To the hospital:

-And here am I with you. Was telling Naruto

-Wow that was a nice story. We really need to get into a mission together sometime like old times…Team 7. Said Sasuke

-Yeah…Maybe when you’ll be out of this hospital we could concentrate into a mission. A hard one too.

-Same old you Naruto. Winked Sasuke with an eye.

-Speaking of team 7…where’s Sakura?? Was asking Naruto

With the sudden Sakura enter the room with some toast and juice.

-Sasuke-Kun I bring you some --- (She was in shock) NARUTO-KUN!!

She let the tablet on the table and ran to hug Naruto with all her strength. Naruto was happy to see her too.

-When I wanted to see you. Smiled Naruto

-How have you been? Ask Sakura

-Really fine. This is my student Matthew. You see this is my team that I was talking about last time. Said Naruto to his student

-They look awful strong. Said Matthew hiding behind Naruto shy.

They all went laughing and remembering the good old time together. Matthew beat his fear and was smiling too. At the Hokage office. She receives a message from the window. She picks it up and began reading while drinking some coffee. Suddenly she let her drink fall and was in shock. She called for two Ambu.

-Yes my Lady. Said the first Ambu.

-Send me Musica Gama and Sega here. Asked the Hokage.

-Right away. Said the second Ambu

-They know about her true identity. This is bad. Was thinking the Hokage

Sometime later they were already in her office.

-Were listening my Lady. Said Musica

-I’ll get to the point, Taka have been kidnap by Akatsuki.

Everyone was in shock.

-Your mission is to bring her here safely and intact.

-Why us my Lady?? Ask Sega

-State is on mission and Sasuke is still weak about last match. Tenten isn’t quite ready to face Akatsuki yet and Sakura is taking care of Sasuke at this point. Only you three left.

Gama was remembering about last clash with Akatsuki when he blows himself up. He swallows his saliva and was nervous.

-Something wrong Gama?? Ask Hokage

-No nothing wrong…Just remembering last mission versus Akatsuki. Said Gama

-Don’t worry; I’ll be here to protect you with my life and Musica here too. Everything will be ok. Said Sega

Gama had his trust back and was ready to get into the mission.

-DISMISS!!

All three run out of the office and outside Konoha on their way to Akatsuki hideout. With Akatsuki:

-We got her. Said Hidan

-Excellent…Great work you two. Where is she now?? Ask Tobi

-In a water cell under examination. Said Kakuzu

-She was hard to beat but we caught her at the end. Said Hidan

-We will discover her true secret and be invincible like she is. Said Tobi with an evil smile.

-Understood. Said Both

-For now stay with her and protect if enemy comes. I’m sure Konoha will be alert sooner enough. Said Tobi

Both of them goes underground where Taka was and were protecting her while looking around and goofing a bit.

Will our three ninja come at time to save Taka from Akatsuki?? What is Taka’s secret that Akatsuki is after?? What it Team 7 next mission now that they are reunite?? TILL CHAP 18

1 comment:

  1. Dear Sasuke.....

    I hv read ur Chp 17.. Its awesome!.. Ok, r u ready for my comment??..Becoz I m gonna be honest here..k?

    1)U hv the potential to become a good writer..u managed to (write)'show' the fight creatively.... I really like it!! Good Job!

    2)Since u hv strong dialougues.....Pls use "---" next time, thats to separate dialougues from narations...So..readers wont get confused!! :)

    3)They all went laughing and remembering the good old time together. Matthew beat his fear and was smiling too. At the Hokage office. She receives a message from the window. She picks it up and began reading while drinking some coffee. Suddenly she let her drink fall and was in shock. She called for two Ambu.

    These r two separate scenes....u shudnt put it in one paragraph!!... make it in diff para..K?

    Wokay!....thats all for now... too many tips will cracks u up!! Haha....

    Luv u lil bro! Take Care & good luck for exams!

    ~BN~

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